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The Woman Behind the Wall

A prelude to Outside the Hull

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The Woman Behind the Wall

A prelude to ‘Outside the Hull’

On Meridian Station, oxygen was not a thought. It came through ceiling vents, passed through homes, schools, and casinos, filled lungs, and vanished without thanks. Public displays showed air quality as a green number. As long as it remained green, eight million people believed space began beyond the windows.

Talia Noor knew better. She knew the pumps, filters, and pressure locks that stood between an ordinary morning and evacuation. She knew which pipe trembled before a bearing broke, which sensor lied in high humidity, and where a repair plate from the last century was still classified as permanent. Walking through the station, she did not see walls. She saw systems keeping one another alive.

Her father first took her into a maintenance shaft when she was nine. He worked illegal double shifts and let her do homework there because nobody could watch her. ‘Listen,’ he said, placing her hand on a pipe. ‘A station always speaks. The trouble is, people only listen when it screams.’

Talia became a mechanic despite his hope that she would choose something safer. He did not die outside, but of lung disease caused by old insulation foam. The operator denied the connection. Talia inherited his tools and his contempt for forms containing the phrase acceptable risk.

Twelve years later she led the exterior team for Sector C: five people and two repair drones, all overworked. Meridian expanded faster than its life support. New residential rings hung from old pipes. In board presentations it was efficiency. In Talia's maintenance plan, it was a bill that would one day come due.

The first sign was an almost immeasurable pressure loss in Line C-44. An exterior camera revealed a dark shadow along a weld. Talia requested a six-hour sector shutdown. Management refused. A trade summit was under way: eight delegations, four hundred reporters, and a reception whose flowers cost more than her annual budget.

She asked for two hours. Director Sayeed smiled as if explaining gravity to a child and cited one hundred and eighty percent redundancy. Talia reminded him that a backup pump had been awaiting repair for six weeks. ‘If that shadow is material fatigue, the line won't fail alone. It will tear the neighbouring run with it.’ Sayeed checked the time. ‘Monitor it.’

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Transmission 05Outside the HullIllustration from the Across the Galaxy universe

Talia monitored it. She installed extra sensors, moved breaks, and sent drones to places with no official maintenance requirement. Her deputy Mei accused her of exhausting the team over a suspicion. Three years earlier, a loose tool case had struck a young technician during work on the solar shield. Talia had approved the safety plan. He lived, but lost a leg. Since then, she checked every clamp herself. The team called it Noor's Liturgy. ‘One report is enough for me,’ she told Mei.

On the eve of the summit, pressure fell another two tenths of a percent. Talia entered the outer service ring herself. Through a small port she saw the station curving away, full of windows and light. In thousands of rooms people ate, argued, slept, and put children to bed. None knew she knelt five metres behind the wall with an instrument against the pipe carrying their air.

The result was clear: microfractures in the composite, longer than a forearm. The line had to be clamped outside before depressurization. The team required four hours and a complete ring closure. Director Sayeed granted ninety minutes between the final reception and the morning press programme. ‘Then you get an emergency repair,’ Talia said. ‘I get a functioning station,’ he replied. ‘No. You get ninety minutes.’

The words almost cost her command. Sayeed put Mei in charge and ordered Talia to remain in control. Officially, Talia accepted. She prepared the suits, checked the tools, and showed Mei the critical seam. Just before deployment, Mei's medical sensor reported an arrhythmia. Mei insisted she could go. Talia locked her suit code. ‘You would do the same,’ Mei protested. ‘Yes. That's why you may hate me later.’

Without Mei, they were short-handed. Sayeed tried to cancel the operation and downgrade the alert until after the summit. Talia put on the helmet. ‘Exterior Team Noor taking over.’ ‘You have no authorization.’ ‘Then start writing the report.’

The outer airlock opened. Air was drawn away, sound disappeared, and Talia's world shrank to breath, displays, and voices in her helmet. She pushed off. The safety tether slowed her gently. Below was not ground but Meridian, brown and storm-wrapped. The station stretched through darkness like a city made of light.

She worked on the clamp with a young technician named Jao. The first anchors held. Then the fracture revealed another pattern. It ran beneath the line into the load-bearing hull plate. A previous repair had used the wrong metal, and differing thermal expansion had forced both structures against each other. ‘We can't do this in ninety minutes,’ Jao said. ‘Then we stay longer.’ The ring would reopen automatically. Talia ordered control to disable it. Sayeed refused.

Twelve minutes before the first supply teams were due to enter, Talia opened a public maintenance channel normally reserved for announcements. ‘This is Exterior Team Noor. Sector C remains closed. The oxygen line is structurally compromised.’ Eight million people did not need to hear. It was enough that the summit reporters did. The automatic opening was disabled.

Jao laughed nervously. ‘Now they'll fire us both.’ ‘Only if we get back inside.’ They fitted a second clamp. As Talia tightened the bolt, the outer plate split farther. A fragment struck Jao's visor without piercing it, and his primary tether released. Talia caught his arm and hooked her reserve strap into his harness. The shock pulled both away from the hull. For one moment their combined weight hung from Talia's main line.

A load warning sounded. The tether was rated for one person. A few metres away floated the open tool case containing the final flexible seal. She could not reach it while Jao hung from her reserve. ‘Let me go,’ he said. A rescue drone was approaching from the airlock—slowly, because Sayeed had allowed only one to stand by. Talia clipped Jao to her main tether, detached herself, and pushed towards the case.

‘Talia,’ Mei said over comms, ‘you are unsecured.’ ‘For the moment.’ She caught the case with her fingertips. The motion turned her away from the station until only measureless black space filled her view. Behind her came Mei's voice, Jao's breathing, and alarms. Talia forced her breath into the rhythm her father had taught her: count four, hold, count four. A station always speaks—even through a taut cable, even through a suit.

The seal trapped beneath her arm, she used the manoeuvring pack to turn back. Twenty metres of emptiness and the last of her propellant lay between her and the hull. Indicators across the ring began changing from green to amber. ‘Exterior Team Noor,’ control called. Sayeed's voice was gone; Mei was in command. ‘Pressure is falling. We need that line.’ Talia aligned herself with the seam. ‘Then we're taking it back.’

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Outside the Hull

The song begins where this prelude ends.